Hi Eamon. I like your magic box poem. I like it how you were very descriptive with your poem. I also liked how you put some characters from Clash of Clans. Next I think you could add a few more pictures.
Hi Eamon, You did a good job at explaining what was in the box. When you said I will put in the box delicious kentucky fried chicken I just got hungry for chicken. I think next time you could put more pictures in your poem.
Hi Eamon. I like your magic box poem. I like it how you were very descriptive with your poem. I also liked how you put some characters from Clash of Clans. Next I think you could add a few more pictures.
ReplyDeleteHi Nathan. Thank you for your comment it was helpful,kind and respectful.Next time I will put more pictures on my work. From Eamon
DeleteKia Ora Eamon i like your magic poem but there's one little mistake it said in my box i will jump 'of' Mt., instead 'off'Everest but its a good poem.
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Hi Callan. Thanks for your comment. I will go back and fix my mistake thank you. Your comment was really nice. From Eamon.
DeleteHi Eamon, I like how you put the old name of KFC and I also liked the Hog Rider bit. I could not find any mistakes. From Alex.
ReplyDeleteHi Alex. It's Eamon here from Karoro School. Thank you for your kind and positive comment. From Eamon.
DeleteHi Eamon,
ReplyDeleteYou did a good job at explaining what was in the box.
When you said I will put in the box delicious kentucky fried chicken I just got hungry for chicken.
I think next time you could put more pictures in your poem.