Monday 5 November 2018

Dinosaurs found in Las Vegas.

At the moment in class, we have been working on descriptive writing. We have been using pictures to give us ideas of what to write about. Here is a piece of writing I did.



Dinosaurs found in Las Vegas.

BREAKING NEWS: There looks to be a Tyrannosaurus Rex in Las Vegas it broke out of Area 51 let’s get a closer look it’s
shiny white teeth shimmers in the sunlight it roars and all the window around it smash into tiny pieces and shower in everyone there.

It seems to be getting closer it roars again ROAR!!! It’s roar was as loud
as dynamite exploding Just then someone screams
:THERE ARE MORE DINOSAURS COMING just then more Dinosaurs
start running down the street,: There is so many: someone says
running down the street seems to be a pack of raptor they
run into the building and run up the stairs.

 we hear them and run
further up we get to the top and block the door.

I grab a flare gun and
shoot it in the air and it alerts a helicopter and it pick us up just before
the raptors break down the door and we escape safe and
sound. THE END!!!!!!!!!





1 comment:

  1. Hello Eamon, it is Tyler.
    I like how you used good language and spelling.
    I don't have to say much bad things about your work but next time you could use a bit more complex punctuation.

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