Persuasive Writing -Why we shouldn't have pets

We have been having a go at writing a piece of persuasive writing. Here is my piece of writing about why we shouldn't have pets.

Title A Short Statement about the topic. eg. ‘Rugby League Is A Great Sport’	It Is Not A Good Idea To Have Pets.
Overview/ Statement of position A brief statement of your view about the topic.  What you believe or want to argue.	I am against pets
Series of Arguments Reasons Your points supporting your view about the topic.  Your arguments to support your statement and information to support these arguments. Remember -argument -supporting detail, reasons, examples	Firstly, pets poo and pee all the time but the worst part is thay bark all day. and to back it up they can break stuff. They can chew your new furniture and shoes, especially when they are puppies.
	Secondly, Pets can cost a lot of money, they need a lot of food, you might hurt them,  there are expenses and there is vet fees, you could run out of money to feed yourself.
	Thirdly, they might go on someone's property and atlack their dogs or wreck some of their stuff. You can get into a lot of trouble if your dog bites somebody and dog can be put down if they hurt people.
	Finally Some dogs can give you diseases that make you sick.Lots of people are allergic to dog’s fur and can have a really bad reaction like a rash covering your body.
Concluding statement Summing it up.  A summary of your arguments and your view on the topic.	Pets are not important in our lives, as they can destroy your life by making you sick, costing you money and make big messes. DO NOT GET A PET.