Best Part Of Me.

Best Part of Me - Poetry short description writing task

Term 2 Weeks 2-3

Purpose of this piece of writing is to:

Learning Intentions

I am learning to use language features to make my writing interesting and engaging for the reader.

I am learning to think carefully about the words I use so that my writing is descriptive and engaging for the reader.

I am learning to add an appropriate visual to my work

I will be successful when I can show….

-I have used some language features to make my writing interesting and engaging (smile, metaphor, alliteration, onomatopoeia, rhyme)

-I have carefully chosen some interesting words to include in my writing

-I have some descriptive words in my writing (adjectives)

-I have added a photo to my writing

The best part of me is my hands.

My hands can hug and play games.

My hands are like machines that do what I command.

My hands are tanned and bony.

My ngirangira (hands) bash my pare (pillow) when I am mad.

My hands hold my mānawa (fingers).

My hands have five knuckles.

My hands are strong and big.

My hands can be used for self defense.

My hand are the best part of me